You remembered! The plot thickens, hooks are being placed, backstory breadcrumbs are slowly revealed - I like it. I’m still surprised I enjoy the sketchy art style as much as I do, it works well here.
Not sure if these are intentional or not so just in case:
Page 19, bottom right panel - is it suppose to be “Lutnent” (stylised speech/name) or is it typo for lieutenant?
Page 27, bottom right panel - I think you missed “you” in “are (you) out of (…)”.
Again, really interesting chapter. Can’t wait for more!
You remembered! The plot thickens, hooks are being placed, backstory breadcrumbs are slowly revealed - I like it. I’m still surprised I enjoy the sketchy art style as much as I do, it works well here.
Not sure if these are intentional or not so just in case:
Again, really interesting chapter. Can’t wait for more!
Thanks so much, I updated the chapters